Błędnie: With terrible temperature, pale and shaking, he was still able to dictate his last will before he sank forever. Poprawnie: With terrible fever, pale and shaking, he was still able to dictate his last will before he sank forever.
Słowo ‘temperature’ oznacza „temperaturę”, ale nie „gorączkę”. Po angielsku „gorączka”, „wysoka temperatura ciała” to ‘fever’, np. ‘My fever was caused by pneumonia’ (“Moja gorączka była wywołana zapaleniem płuc”).